Thread:Gavinawsome/@comment-4775516-20130910042802/@comment-4233120-20130913020005

Yeah, continuing on with what Al is saying, you should restructure your pages so that they look neater and also add more content onto them. All I see are a few very poorly written sentences, so whenever you have the time, please try and make the pages more expansive and thorough.

Note, I'm just critiquing and giving advice. I'm not trying to make you angry.