Thread:SonikkuAensland/@comment-5688420-20171022100628/@comment-1899606-20171026041830

Got the full review of EW from the awards it won. :3

"Starting off with your cover think it's unique and interesting. I think it compliments the plot well. Your description was written nicely. It adds good detail and enough to captivate the reader without giving too much of the story away. I love your overall plot of the story, but I think you can work with your character development a bit more. Don't be afraid to take risks in your writing and experiment to make your character's personality shine through. Your dialogue could touched up a bit to make it more realistic but overall, great work. Make sure to always proof read to catch those silly grammar mistakes, especially in the dialogue, I see several in your writing. I believe this story can go far if you fix some small details in your story. Wonderful work!"