Thread:Loconator3000/@comment-5688420-20180715002541/@comment-1899606-20180722054034

This is his idea for a proper prologue for him:

" An alien frigate is traveling through the Milky Way's asteroid belt. It comes up on a massive group of asteroids headed straight for it and it opens fire with various guns, tearing through the asteroids with ease, the crew maybe even chuckling about how easy that was, or how it was a close one. One of the helmsmen of the ship then starts to panic, screaming that the zlocu are coming. A group of black ships are then seen tearing through this frigate somehow completely unhindered by their guns, whether impervious or too fast. We pan to see they are headed straight for earth. Obviously the scene will need a little more life to it's characters, but notice everything the audience is being told. The Zlocu are tough, dangerous, enemies of other aliens, well known to those aliens, headed for earth, earth is likely in trouble, we might know what the Zlocu look like depending on how you navigate the scene, we know they're from space, it's a good guess humans don't know what they are and aren't prepared, especially considering how tough you would apparently need to be to fight them- all that information and set up without any real exposition. Just an example."