Thread:Element Knight 375/@comment-5401852-20140829044811/@comment-5401852-20140829120636

Element Knight 375 wrote: Nice to hear! One reservation I had about your idea was that it was very long. I think it will be an improvement! :) I don't mind if you're honest with flaws, because that helps me to fix them and thus make things better, but trust me, you're not the only one that thinks the idea (or as well, the entire article) is insanely huge to the point of being tired of reading it, so I will try putting the main articles in the game and the rest will be split in other articles, now it will be up to the reader to read them or not, but the main point  resides.

I hope it is an improvement, I thought about what to do with the idea and it happened that the first thing I saw was the extreme lenght and the second thing the pointless plot of the storyline, making the rest of the game uninteresting.