Talk:Power Unlocked/@comment-5061795-20120516033532/@comment-4743273-20120516055156

I think it's a good, interesting idea. It's a big plus how you show such direction with the concept. If I had to make a suggestion, I'd say you might want to expand on the plot a bit, and explain the traits of characters from different realms. Otherwise, the whole thing is fantastic and wonderfully original.