Thread:SonikkuAensland/@comment-5688420-20161221090049/@comment-5688420-20161223170339

ClarentBloodArthur wrote: The writings alright, but I think you could've doen much better with some moments, the biggest one being how Kiyo takes in the news of Motoko's death and then the ending itself. well, considering that CM is my very first novel, it is quite bound to have a bunch of glaring errors. and i admit that. nobody is perfect. especially not someone who had just started his writing career

hopefully they will be fixed once NakaGei begins next year.