Thread:Loconator3000/@comment-5688420-20180715002541/@comment-1899606-20180724105526

I presented Logan's proposed backstory to ImperialSun. He thinks that, given the anti-bigotry message EW brings, feels a bit too anvilicious for it.

He suggested it that I change by mixing the bullying incident in which Logan brutally beats down some bullies, but this time as revenge for causing the suicide of some of his friends, who were discriminated and Logan was too passive to act at the time, thinking they could handle it themselves. He was wrong. It was also combined with the fact that some of the friends were white and given how white people are given scrutiny by other races, many looked the other way.

But the result is the same, he feels guilt in beating up because it went against his pacifism and for the fact that some of the family members of the bullies weren't aware of their behaviors and launched charges against Logan.

Oh, and given Logan's from California, the bullies should be changed into Latin ones. (But regardless, he still got bullying from white kids.)

Keep in mind, Sunny's a Hispanic Conservative but it sounds good...or not?