Thread:ClarentBloodArthur/@comment-5688420-20170608065036/@comment-5903569-20170610181641

Pros:


 * A bunch of awesome dogfight scenes


 * Plenty of touching slow moving moments involving romance.


 * Seiner near the end of the story


 * Dakrin's cathartic death (even though I liked his assholish persona)

Cons:


 * A few gramatical errors, especially at the first few beginning chapters


 * Raven. Seriously, he's friggin' sadistic.


 * How certain lines of dialogue were written considering the characters' personalities (not your fault, I know what you were getting at)


 * Hmm... I think that's about it.