Talk:The Element Chronicles/@comment-26135418-20150314190932

This looks really great! I like how customizable every thing is. Its wonderful how many element choices there are, and how each has many uses.

I really like the backstory (of deception and betrayal and all). And the end battle looks epic.

Best of Luck!

It might make the game more interesting if Zyr tried to convince you to help him. If convinced, you still get to fight Gairus, and maybe be rewarded by the Gods. The player’s life after the game could have more options, as the new Champion of Zyr. (Sorry, you don’t earn the self-given title of “Dark Empress” without wanting to do bad things. Mwahaha.)

(One small grammatical error I noticed: In the fourth paragraph of the Ending Sequence, you say ‘plain of existence’ instead of ‘plane of existence’. Unless it was meant to be a pun?)

(I also enjoyed reading the comments section. It’s really cute how GG persuaded you to join the Wikia. Makes me feel a little cheap though, because I signed up immediately.)