Thread:Loconator3000/@comment-5688420-20180715002541/@comment-5688420-20180722041407

Loconator3000 wrote: Torkuda is re-reading the first two chapters...he now thinks the prologue should be rewritten into a scene that establishes the story's tone perfectly instead of a Star Wars esque backstory text. So basically, he now wants things to be restored the way it was before.

Da hell.