Thread:Element Knight 375/@comment-5401852-20150116101456/@comment-5401852-20150209005819

Hello! Sorry, ever since I entered high school I have been way happier... and way busier than before, so weekends are my praised days XD.

Anyways, something great came to my mind today, so I decided to give the storylinethe most best flow, because the previous one had the plothole of not explaining how the siblings reunited or how they "visited" each other on their journey quite well, it was something unexistant actually, it was put there for the sake of being put there.

SO, with this fairly new story, it is much better, it has a more fluent progress and it clears a lot of doubts, I also left the mystery among the chapters of the siblings to make the story more interesting, and left the small plot twist for the final chapter, overall, I think it is way better now.

You might ask now "Where's the previous prologue that explained their past?", Well, ever since of the story revamp, this is going to be left for laaaater on, around the final chapter from the extra story, where everything is clear now, don't worry, remember every change I make is always for the better and this is no exception.

Edit: I almost forgot that the new introduction is on the main page, on the Chapters/Storyline section of course, I hope you enjoy the fairly revamped story :)