Thread:Thunder the Coyote/@comment-26381576-20161127011414/@comment-24183810-20161204130938

I like that you the Fortune City Arena as the background.



To Taka: I have. There's just one thing that bothers me about the chapter where news of Motoko's death is broken to Kiyo and how he deals with it. I think it should be a bit more deeper and emotional than what was shown. Its like he was told "Oh by the way Kiyo, Twilight killed Motoko" and his response was similar to saying "Oh okay, I'll forgive Twilight later."