Thread:ComicReadingGamer/@comment-5688420-20170930110825/@comment-1899606-20171006183925

A judge in Wattpad give a score for EW in a contest...it's 58/100...mostly for the first 4 chapters, namely in what she felt the rushness and some of the grammar and dialogue. Yeah, I know that wasn't an expected score, but I must be adapted for varying opinions. I must have a thick skin and humility after all.

And the judge isn't that critical after all, I talked to her and told me that she at least knows that her judging is not a shared one and others would think of EW differently in their first reading and like you said, the potential shows up in the later half. After all, the magic of getting an audience is to grip them in the first chapters and then continuing for the others.

Also, she gave me steps in how I could translate EW's format into a Light Novel, which she said it could be most appropriate medium for the story.