Thread:Thunder the Coyote/@comment-26381576-20180511193705/@comment-5688420-20180515182026

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There's also the fact that some details are either so vague or underexplained that it just leaves me, the reader, stratching my head in confusion.

Case in point, one part of the first chapter was so badly explained that I had to stop reading cause my brain was literaly hurting from the lack of sense it made.