Thread:SonikkuAensland/@comment-5688420-20171014002841/@comment-1899606-20171021044203

Remember the guy JamesLester again? Well, I did some rewrites in many scenes for EW's chapter 2 and 3 to see if I can fix the pacing issues that are going. His response? I did very well in establishing the villains properly in chapter 2 but still lack other areas in the field and finds there are still pacing issues, not to mentione he finds the dialogue all over the place and finds the characters unlikable because they aren't fleshed out enough...

Does he have some unrealistic expectations or something?