Talk:White Void: The Memories/@comment-26419622-20150528175309

 "fathering two sons referred only as Ophelia and Luke" 

This part stood out to me since Ophelia is usually seen as a girl's name. Since you use 'referred' I'm assuming they are code names and not their actual names. If the name is not pivotal to the plot or serves as a symbolic purpose, you may want to consider the male equivalent to 'Ophelia' so not to confuse your audience as the game story unfolds.