Thread:Thunder the Coyote/@comment-26381576-20170926141743/@comment-26381576-20170929111801

Loconator3000 wrote: Loconator3000 wrote: And that same person also told me that EW also feels rushed in some parts, at least from the first chapter. A recent reader who read EW. He told me he finds the concept and story interesting and creative so far, but this is his criticism by chapter one. It improves afterwards, that he should know.